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bangelfreak |
Wow! A Hand of Applause!
Jul 26 2010, 12:38 PM EDT
Good job DSforeverlover! I like it! My only criticism is that the blood part where Domonic looks pained is very alike to the scene in the television show with Stefan! Otherwise, a superb beginning of a good vampire story that you should keep up with! It's full of great wit, and romance :)Spectacular Job! ~Bangelfreak Do you find this valuable? |
Ileana_The_Bloody |
1. RE: Wow! A Hand of Applause!
Jul 26 2010, 2:03 PM EDT
I like it, although I'd like more backgrounf info on Adriana. She seems pretty cool! And how do you pronounce Domonic's name? Is it like Dom Oh Nick?
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DSforeverlover |
2. RE: Wow! A Hand of Applause!
Jul 26 2010, 7:37 PM EDT
Thank you, but i didnt even notice it!! i will see what i can do
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DSforeverlover |
3. RE: Wow! A Hand of Applause!
Jul 26 2010, 7:38 PM EDT
alright! but i dont really know about the whole more backround thing. i mean i though about it but i couldnt really find away to fit it into the story but i will se what i can do thanx!
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Ileana_The_Bloody |
4. RE: Wow! A Hand of Applause!
Jul 27 2010, 5:59 AM EDT
You might be able to squeaze in an English assignment, ya know? Like she has to write a paper on where she's from and stuff like that. Lol. :D I'm writing my own story, so I TOTALLY know how difficult it can get to push background info into a story. Lol.
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bangelfreak |
5. RE: Wow! A Hand of Applause!
Jul 27 2010, 5:34 PM EDT
"You might be able to squeaze in an English assignment, ya know? Like she has to write a paper on where she's from and stuff like that. Lol. :D I'm writing my own story, so I TOTALLY know how difficult it can get to push background info into a story. Lol."Yeah, writer's block is also not-so-fun! :) I have a few projects I'm working on and you can't really push a story. If you're not in the mood to write, it shows up in your writing. :) Do you find this valuable? |
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Ileana_The_Bloody |
7. RE: Wow! A Hand of Applause!
Jul 30 2010, 7:38 PM EDT
I've got a Damon Love Story on www.quizilla.comIf you look me up (DeaLecta) then click on 'Welcome To Vampire Town' you can read it. :D Do you find this valuable? |
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