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, May 9 2010, 2:32 PM EDT
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| Anonymous | Story is interesting but needs close editing | 1 | Apr 9 2011, 9:37 PM EDT by Angalgal | ||
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Thread started: Feb 24 2011, 10:26 PM EST
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Hi,
I was interested in finding out what happened next in your story, but was distracted by missing words, words out of order grammatically etc. I write too, and I read my work over and over again, revise, edit, read again and edit some more until it is almost perfect. I always need someone to review my work as well to catch anything that I did not catch. We are imperfect creatures and always make mistakes. Your story is interesting, and would be even better if it was well edited. |
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| Angalgal | cont of the story | 0 | Apr 9 2011, 9:36 PM EDT by Angalgal | ||
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Thread started: Apr 9 2011, 9:36 PM EDT
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The moment I blinked the vampyre was gone. I looked up at my Stefan questioningly but Damon was the one who answered my unasked question. "It could be a trap but the vampyre is indeed gone I heard him leave the property. However he could go to your house." Stefan looked troubled by that fact and told me I was not leaving anytime soon.....TBC
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